Moon fish: Poems to make you laugh and think by Harry Laing
Ford Street Publishing, 2019. ISBN: 9781925804256.
(Age: 5-11) Theme: Poetry. This is Harry Laing's second book of
poems; he has performed the poems from his first collection, Shoctopus,
at festivals and in schools around Australia. There are some
exquisite illustrations in here that aren't fully appreciated at
first glance; I think because there is so much variation in style it
is a little overwhelming or confusing at first. But when you take
each individual poem on its own merits there are some fantastic
pieces and many would be great for reading aloud and performing.
Illustrations by Shaun Tan, Lucia Masciullo and Mitch Vane are
particular standouts. Sadly, there are quite a few illustrations
that are disappointing or just don't seem to belong, especially when
placed next to others of a very high calibre. There are some
standout poems (Termite tales, Spider action, Creatures you wouldn't
want to meet, Pet flea) and some that are relatable to the target
audience (It's pizza! And Dog language) but the lack of consistency
in both the text and the illustrations (if one element was more
uniform it would help) makes the collection a little unfocused. In
addition, some poems are trying to be a bit too hip to appeal to a
young crowd (I'm an angry old lady), some are a bit too strange (The
yumbie) and some won't be understood by the target age group (I'm
Henry Lawson's moustache, TV Pug). While there are some impressive
elements here, it doesn't seem to gel all that cohesively as a
complete work.
Nicole Nelson